Communion Of Dreams


Well, well, well.
March 8, 2010, 4:41 pm
Filed under: Publishing, Science Fiction, Writing stuff

A couple of weeks ago I said this:

“So, now we wait and see what the publisher decides.”

I just heard.

It’s good news.

There’s still a final review from the publisher, and contracts, and copy editing, et cetera, all to be done. But at this point those are mostly just details (which need to be tended to, but they are details nonetheless.) Looks like the actual, honest-to-Gawd printed version of Communion of Dreams will be out sometime in the second quarter this year. Yeah, like in the next few months.

Huh. Who woulda thunk it?

I imagine there’ll be an “official announcement” sometime, and I’ll post that when it happens. But for now, I thought I’d just share the good (preliminary) news.

Jim Downey



Paradigm shifts.

In college (I graduated in 1980) I suffered repeatedly from peptic ulcers. My senior year it seemed that I lived largely on a diet of Maalox (which I came to loathe) and Tagamet, supplemented by Pepto-Bismol when I just couldn’t bring myself to drink any more Maalox. “Everyone knew” that ulcers were caused by stress, which produced an overabundance of gastric acid – technology had allowed for better studies of the production of gastric acid and the mechanism of it eroding stomach/intestinal lining – and there were more than a few occasions when my doctor recommended that I consider some kind of mild tranquilizer to help calm me down. I drank, instead.

Which, frankly, didn’t help my ulcers much. In fact, it just made me worse. My senior year was hell, and I actually got quite sick my final semester. Graduation helped, in that a big part of the stress was removed, and I backed way off of how much I drank, but I still had ulcer problems for the next few months.

But in the fall or winter of that year I developed a pretty nasty case of pneumonia (I’m prone to it), and had to go on a couple of courses of broad-spectrum antibiotics before I beat it.

I didn’t think much about it at the time, but the following year I didn’t have any ulcer problems. In fact, since then, I haven’t had any ulcer problems. It wasn’t until several years later that medical science came to understand why. No, it had nothing to do with me, though I had inadvertently stumbled upon the same thing that researchers came to discover: that stomach ulcers are predominantly caused by a bacteria (H. pylori). And the best treatment is a combination of powerful antibiotics with bismuth subsalicylate, the active ingredient in Pepto-Bismol. Yes, stress can be a factor in the development of an ulcer, but the real culprit is a bacterium. It wasn’t until the 1990s that this came to be the accepted model in the medical community.

This was my first personal, direct experience with how a paradigm shift can make a difference in our lives and health. Had I not gotten lucky with a combination of drugs and Pepto-Bismol, I might have been miserable with ulcers for another dozen years before medical science changed treatment regimens.

Now, I knew about Kuhn’s work – had read him in High School, I think, or at least in college. And his ideas were very influential in the science fiction I read, even my understanding of history (which I have written about before). And all of that plays out in Communion of Dreams, which is largely about a shift in perspective of what it means to be human.

This morning I came across another wonderful case study of this very same phenomenon of paradigm shift changing medical science, and how technology actually played a role in causing a misunderstanding of the mechanism involved, leading to more death and misery until a new paradigm came along:

First, the fact that from the fifteenth century on, it was the rare doctor who acknowledged ignorance about the cause and treatment of the disease. The sickness could be fitted to so many theories of disease – imbalance in vital humors, bad air, acidification of the blood, bacterial infection – that despite the existence of an unambigous cure, there was always a raft of alternative, ineffective treatments. At no point did physicians express doubt about their theories, however ineffective.

The disease? Scurvy. The case study? Robert Falcon Scott’s 1911 expedition to the South Pole. Here’s a bit from the beginning of the article:

Now, I had been taught in school that scurvy had been conquered in 1747, when the Scottish physician James Lind proved in one of the first controlled medical experiments that citrus fruits were an effective cure for the disease. From that point on, we were told, the Royal Navy had required a daily dose of lime juice to be mixed in with sailors’ grog, and scurvy ceased to be a problem on long ocean voyages.

But here was a Royal Navy surgeon in 1911 apparently ignorant of what caused the disease, or how to cure it. Somehow a highly-trained group of scientists at the start of the 20th century knew less about scurvy than the average sea captain in Napoleonic times. Scott left a base abundantly stocked with fresh meat, fruits, apples, and lime juice, and headed out on the ice for five months with no protection against scurvy, all the while confident he was not at risk. What happened?

It’s a long but fascinating article. And it perfectly recounts how technological improvements contributed to a misunderstanding of scurvy. One more passage from the article:

Third, how technological progress in one area can lead to surprising regressions. I mentioned how the advent of steam travel made it possible to accidentaly replace an effective antiscorbutic with an ineffective one. An even starker example was the rash of cases of infantile scurvy that afflicted upper class families in the late 19th century. This outbreak was the direct result of another technological development, the pasteurization of cow’s milk. The procedure made milk vastly safer for infants to drink, but also destroyed vitamin C. For poorer children, who tended to be breast-fed and quickly weaned onto adult foods, this was not an issue, but the wealthy infants fed a special diet of cooked cereals and milk were at grave risk. It took several years for infant scurvy, at first called “Barlow’s disease”, to be properly identified. At that point, doctors were caught between two fires. They could recommend that parents not boil their milk, and expose the children to bacterial infection, or they could insist on pasteurization at the risk of scurvy. The prevaling theory of scurvy as bacterial poisoning clouded the issue further, so that it took time to arrive at the right solution – supplementing the diet with onion juice or cooked potato.

Read it.

Jim Downey



It’s a Trap(door)!

I spent most of yesterday re-reading Communion of Dreams, to make sure that all the little changes I’d made in the previous week were correct and to see if I could catch a few more typos. Once it was all checked and double checked, I created manuscript files in the format preferred by the publisher, appended an email, and zipped the whole thing off. If you would like to see the finished product, the CoD homepage has now been updated to have the final .pdf version.

So, now we wait and see what the publisher decides.

And speaking of the publisher, I have had a couple of queries about them. It’s a new enterprise, Trapdoor Books. I like their attitude and approach, though of course with something so new it is hard to judge. And if this works out, I hope that I can help them as much as they can help me. If it doesn’t work out, no hard feelings on my part – lord knows that I had to turn down a lot of talented artists in the years I had the gallery.

But it does have something of the same feeling as when I first started at the University of Iowa Center for the Book. That too was a new enterprise, and no one was really sure how it would work out. Now it is perhaps the most highly regarded book arts program in the country, and my almost 20 year career as a conservator has both benefited from the reputation and added to it in a small way.

So, we’ll see. It looks like things are moving again with Her Final Year, and that book could garner a lot of mainstream attention, since there is little in the care-giving literature from a male perspective. BBTI will cross 2 million hits later this month, and we’re currently planning another very large series of tests this spring which will once again generate a lot of interest in the gun world. It could be a very interesting year.

Jim Downey



Whew.
February 5, 2010, 5:27 pm
Filed under: Publishing, Science Fiction, Writing stuff

As I mentioned the other day, this week I’ve been working very intently on the revisions of Communion of Dreams.

For those who have never tried to write book-length fiction, let me try and explain how mentally challenging it is to do it right.

You’re juggling the entire text in your head – and each of the pieces of conversation or narrative all has to ‘fit’ with everything else that happens in the book. Not just in terms of actual plot development, but also in terms of tone, or characterization, or even dialect. To do it, I spent four days just closely re-reading the entire book, to make sure it was all fresh in my memory. Then I spent a day just thinking about what changes to make. And each of the last two days I spent about 5 hours a day making the changes and making sure they all fit.

To give you an analogy, it’s something like being the organizer for a very large convention at which there are multiple speakers with different demands and needs. You have to make sure that everything is scheduled in such a way as to minimize conflicts. And that each speaker has the materials and equipment they need. Oh, you also have to handle all the registrations yourself, the morning of the event. And cook the banquet to be served that night. And make sure that all the toilets have enough toilet paper. Does that give you some idea of the mental juggling involved?

It’s do-able. And very rewarding. But it is also exhausting. And that’s how I feel after finishing it up.

But the manuscript is done. And it *is* better than it was. I just hope that it is good enough for the publisher, and the people who may one day read it.

Jim Downey



They don’t make ’em like that any more.
February 1, 2010, 1:23 pm
Filed under: Humor, MetaFilter, Publishing, Violence, Writing stuff

Couple of quick notes . . .

I’ve been working on the promised revisions of Communion of Dreams the last couple of days, and hope to finish up well before my promised deadline. It’s funny – I find myself now reading it, thinking “people are going to be reading this – I’ve got to get it right.” When, actually, it doesn’t really require much in the way of changes at this point – just catching a few minor typos and whatnot, and adding in a requested plot tweak. But it is an odd thought that the damned thing may finally be published – even after some 20,000+ have downloaded it.

And I definitely want to point you to this great article about one of the last century’s true characters: “Mad Jack” Churchill. Anyone who had both the only reported ‘kill’ during WWII with a longbow *and* single-handedly captured 42 German soldiers with a broadsword deserves a look, but that was only a small part of this guy’s story. Here’s an excerpt:

Still, the little party fought on until the revolver ammunition was gone and Churchill was down to a single magazine for his carbine. A German mortar round killed three of his little party and wounded still another, leaving Churchill as the only unwounded defender on the hilltop. It was the end. Churchill turned to his (bag)pipes, playing “Will ye no come back again” until German grenades burst in his position and he was stunned by a fragment from one of them. He regained consciousness to discover German soldiers “prodding us, apparently to discover who was alive.”

What a character!

More ‘Vega$’ stories later.

Jim Downey

“Mad Jack” link via MeFi.



Funky.
January 16, 2010, 10:32 am
Filed under: Ballistics, Depression, Emergency, Guns, Health, Predictions, Publishing, Writing stuff

Well, I’ve been in a funk all week.

The news that UTI is closing down, a decision I respect and even prompted, is still news of one aspect of my life coming to an end.

And there are others.

My shooting buddy here in town is moving to California. We’ll still be able to keep in touch, but it is still a loss to have him go. He’ll be leaving this week – while I am gone to the SHOT Show.

And our old neighbor, Ray, is slipping in health. This is common in the elderly when they have taken a fall, or moved out of their home. We saw him the other day, and, well, I’m glad his daughter is in town this weekend to visit him.

Even the really good news about the book I got last Monday is a bit bittersweet. That may be hard for some folks to understand. But for me, I enjoy the process of working on something – and miss it when a project is done. I started thinking about the story behind Communion of Dreams about 15 years ago, and really started writing it over a decade ago. There’s a lot of my life tied up in that book.

So, forgive the funk. A lot of changes, all at once.

I will be mostly unavailable through the 26th, but will try and schedule some posts to cycle while I am gone. And I may have a chance to post some thoughts about my trip while out in Vegas – we’ll see.

Jim Downey



A farewell.
January 13, 2010, 10:52 am
Filed under: Writing stuff

Just a note to link to my farewell post over on UTI: Like tears . . . in rain.

I’ll explain a bit more after the owner of the site has a chance to offer his own comments. But I want to re-iterate here that it has been a real pleasure working with him and writing for that site these last few years.

UPDATE:
Brent’s now posted his news over on UTI: He’s decided to shut down the site. Since it had largely been just me posting there for the last year, my voice had grown ‘stale’, and so I suggested to Brent that he consider what direction to go with the site. As I told him, I know that this was a tough decision, but one that I respect.

Jim Downey



Huh.
January 11, 2010, 5:47 pm
Filed under: Predictions, Publishing, Science Fiction, Writing stuff

I’d mentioned in my 2009 review that I was still waiting to hear back from the publisher about the revised Communion of Dreams manuscript.

Well, I just got an email. Nothing is finalized yet, but it looks like the book will be published, perhaps in the second quarter of this year.

Huh.

They have asked about a couple of changes to the text (ones I will have no problem making, either emotionally or mechanically). I’ve told them that I can make those changes within a month, even allowing for me going to the SHOT Show next week.

So.

Huh.

Well, keep your fingers crossed – no contracts have been signed yet. But this looks like it’s going to happen. The editor *really* liked the book – one excerpt from the email I received:

The protagonist, Jon, was consistent throughout, and I think he provided a good center through which the evolution of the other characters occurs. The Sidwell character was a surprise, in that I expected him to be a static character, but he turned out to have much more depth. Even the commander of the Marines, Navarr, seemed non-stereotypical to me.

Nice.

Huh.

I think I need a drink.

Jim Downey



Final stats for 2009.

As I have done for the last couple of years, I like to look at the stats for my sites on New Years Day – numbers don’t lie.

But they can be a bit confusing. Here’s how. In 2009, I could say that 9,619 people downloaded some or all of Communion of Dreams. That would break down as 5,877 downloads of the original “complete” .pdf of the book, 156 copies of the revised version, 3,183 of the first mp3, and 403 copies of the first chapter. Or I could say that there were a total of 6,765 downloads, using the numbers for the “complete” .pdfs plus the minimum downloads of both the mp3 and individual chapter files (on the theory that those numbers reflect “complete” downloads of the book in those formats.) For my year-end numbers in the past I have used the latter formula, and I will do so again.

So, 2009 had 6,765 downloads. That compares to 6,288 in 2007, and 6,182 in 2008. How many people have actually read the book, I have no idea – I have heard from people that they have passed on the .pdf they downloaded to friends, and others have told me that they printed the thing out and gave copies to others. So that would boost the numbers. Then again, just because someone downloaded the thing, doesn’t mean they read it. Lord knows I have plenty of books I own but have never gotten around to reading.

Which brings up another item – back in August I mentioned that I was working on a revision because there was a publisher who was interested in the book. In November I mentioned that I had submitted the manuscript with the revisions, and was waiting for them to take another look at it. Well, I’m still waiting, though the publisher said that he was going to assign it to one of their readers and go through it himself, and would get back to me soon. I’m not complaining about the wait – six weeks or so is not at all unreasonable – but I do wonder whether he just didn’t want to give me the bad news leading up to the holidays. So, we’ll see what comes of that.

I’m also in a “wait and see” mode on my two other writing projects. My co-author on the caregiving book Her Final Year still has to finish his editing before we can proceed with that, and I haven’t had a chance to get together with my sister to really get started on My Father’s Gun. But now that the end of the year is past, I hope to make progress on both of those soon.

Other aspects of life in 2009? A mix. I did get a lot of good conservation work done, though losing the one big client in the fall due to the economy hurt a lot – I have other work, but nowhere near as much, so that has hindered my efforts to resolve long standing debt leftover from the gallery. My health is better than it was a year ago, but I still need to lose several stones. The BBTI project was a huge success through 2009, and I’m sure will continue to be a source both of work and pleasure in the coming year. Otherwise, well, if you read this blog you probably already have had your fill of my introspection.

So, goodbye 2009, and best wishes to one and all for a better 2010.

Jim Downey



800-568-8276
December 24, 2009, 11:15 am
Filed under: Humor, Marketing, Music, Promotion, Weather, Writing stuff

Or 1-800-Lotta-Posts.

Yup, this is post #800. And since I’ve gone this far, I should at least see it to 910.

OK, I’m in a bit of a silly mood. Blame it on the big muckin’ storm rolling our way.

Anyway, 800 posts. It’s been 6 months since the last big round number, so it looks like I have slowed down some in my posting, but not a lot. Since then, there have been another 12,000 hits to this blog, and about 5,000 more downloads of the novel. I’ll have a final tally on the year after the 1st, but it looks like things have picked up a bit overall in 2009.

Have a Merry Christmas, everyone. Be safe if you have to travel. And try not to let the family drive you nuts.

Jim Downey




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